Very amusing chapter you've written here. I like how Harry is more assertive and yet also more controlled when dealing with Snape.
A bit of Tony's personality with Harry's makes for a very dangerous enemy. Hopefully Dumbledore and Snape will realize this sooner as opposed to later...
The bit about Dr. Strange was awesome, I am drawn back into my childhood and reading comic books.
Thanks for writing,
Matt
Author's response
- The Harry vs Snape confrontation has people liking it, or hating it...
- I don't see Dumbles as evil in this fic, manipulative, sure. But Harry doesn't manipulate very well.
- Strange is a fun character, who is going to appear in a cameo in three or four more chapters.