Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) MonCappy 2007-12-13

I see Professer Shit has already gotten himself in a childish little snit. I can't wait to see Harry put the worthless little egomaniac in his place. I look forward to seeing what Dumbledore and Shit's reaction to Harry's conditions will be.

I can't imagine them actually complying with them so I expect to see another confrontation in the near future. This little confrontation certainly isn't the end of it.

One thing Dumbledore needs to be mindful of is that Harry does not think himself worthless and he actually has a support system in place. The idea that Harry will be easily manipulated or used will hopefully be dispelled in his mind and soon. If not, there will be a confronation and I find it extremely unlikely that Dumbledore will emerge unscathed.

Please note that as of these two chapters I am unable to determine if you have an evil manipulative Dumbledore of a manipulative but well intentioned one in this fanfiction. I do hope that Professor Shit meets an unpleasant sticky end, though.

Author's response

- Somehow I get the feeling that you don't care for Snape... It's subtle, but does come through.

- I don't know if there will be anymore confrontations between Snape and Harry, more of an armed detante... That and Harry is going to scare the bejeebers out of Severus next chapter.

- I see the point of an AU adventure to be different. A Harry who won't be manipulated or controlled is the point of the story.

- To my mind, being manipulative and being a good guy are not mutually exclusive traits...