Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) thedon1023 2007-12-13

i bow to your mighty story writing prowess. though i find it funny (and im a wee bit envious...but hey, who wouldnt be with these awesome stories?) that someone your age has a better imagination then the teenagers that usually write these fanfictions.anyways damn this chapter was freakin awesome, i was practically shivering in excitement, you know that feeling you get when someone gets a dressing down but everyone knows they deserved it while at the sametime wishing and hoping to never be on the receiving end of the one delivering the dressing down. anyways i like Harry Stark hes a cool dude, someone i could hang with even if hes only like 11 and could very well kick my ass. since Harry is Tony Starks son in this and he acts like him can we expect for Harry to become a playboy(once his balls drop of course lol). cause if so then i have a few words to say about that: "Twins" and "Brainy-chicks..."(im sure we all know the end of that line). anyways i look forward to your next chapter

-The Don

Author's response

- By Cracky! Them whippersnappers had best watch out! And stay off my lawn!

- When (if) he gets older Harry will date, sure. I don't see the likelihood of a 'ship for many years.