Very intense. The pain she's feeling is so well-written. Just wow. I'd write a long review, but all I can really say is "Wow." You nearly made me cry. Nothing I've read has made me cry for years...and besides it was a different cry. Way different. Good stuff, keep it up!
Author's response
I'm honored!
It doesn't really sound well to say I'm so honored I made you cry lol but I'm glad it evoked emotions!