Wow, that was amazing. Intense and excruciatingly detailed. Ow.
Aw, that's too bad about not writing Frank//Gerard anymore. You're a great writer. I kind of feel like stopping writing fanfiction altogether, but, I can't write anything else. I guess. I don't even know if I can write fanfiction... =P
But, that was great. Good as always, not uneven in the least in my opinion. =) -g