I liked your solution to Voldemort's attack, but I think it's safe to say that all of your readers did. One thing I didn't like was the direction of Lucius' conversation with Sirius. They were talking about taking Muggle-borns away from their homes and Sirius wasn't making any objections...seems pretty twisted and unfair to me, but I s'pose Sirius just doesn't bother fighting with Lucius on every point.
Author's response
Sirius is very confused aobut his feelings for the Muggle world, and also thinks its better for Lucius to press to take Muggle children away from Muggles than to kill them all.
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