An interesting start to Charlie's visit home. I get the feeling that there's more going on behind the scenes than most of the protagonists know. 'Twill be interesting to see how this full visit works out and just -what- particular item(s) Albus has in mind for Charlie to give May.
You're quite definitely keeping my interest, here.
Author's response
Hi Evan!
Thanks for the review! I once thought that this trip home would amount to about 6000 words and be one chapter long. Foolish me!
Dumbledore always has the best gadgets and magical items. I hope this one meets the standard set by JKR with some of the previous items. I just need to be careful it doesn't become some UBER item.
I'm glad my story continues to keep your interest!
--Jim