wow!! ur story is absolutely BEATIFUL! i have never read a story like yours before, and the way u write is so....GOD DAMN WONDERFUL!! i luv stories where there's good detail and awesome characters.....AND U HAVE WRITTEN A GOD DAMN GOOD ONE MY FRIEND!! i luv luv luv luv luv Skyblade ^__^(he's my favorite character along with Amihan!!). ;D and your character descriptions...it's like....i can see them running around through my head...(sounds wierd but...oh well :D)!! i luv luv luv luv luv this storeh so....please...UPDATE (cause i really really really want to read more!!) :D