(#) road 2007-12-21
hey,great story but I recomend that you fix tje order of your chapters and check your spelling.By the way,this is your brother Daniel.
Author's response
look...we already tried fixing the chapter order remember? i dunt no how...and my spellingg....shut up! i no how to spell buh wen i type i like to change things up..thx n e way