An interesting and original story. I like what I've read so far with the first 6 chapters. I like that the chapters have gotten longer as you've settled into the story. After reading the first chapter that was rather short, I feared the whole story was short. I am happy that it is long. I hope this story is complete and if it isn't that you will finish it.
Author's response
It's not completed as yet, far from it. I'm getting there, though. I'm having way too much fun with this to quit.
Vanir