Nice story but yes you do need a Beta.
It's boring as of now. It'd have been nice to find if he had a block and who put it (for sure I mean).
Besides one thing I don't get (same with JK's books). Why doesn't he show extra power because to fight Voldemort he needs it. Can you please rectify that in your fic?
Also,
- Don't make him appear an arrogant person
- don't make him political fool. all stories do that and I am not sure why.
Confusion:
if he has Tom's knowledge then why is he readin it again? he has the knowledge so he should just go ahead and practice it.
Looking forward to next chapter.
if you think there'd be a bit of time between posting chapters, then can you make the chapters a bit long? like double than the 3rd chapter you have right now?