This is starting to be a very interesting story. It would be nice if Harry could take the lessons from Tom's early life and learn from it.
Harry should also be able to understand what makes Voldemort tick a little better if he has his early memories.
I like the fact that you are actually showing that Harry is 'growing up' as a result of his little 'accident'. In most stories, it seems that Harry goes from 15 to 25 years old (in the way he acts) in just a few paragraphs.
It will be interesting to see how Harry relates to girls now that he is 'older'. I'm sure Ginny would be very 'compatable' to Harry since she was posessed by the same Tom Riddle (Voldemort) for the better part of a year and probable has a lot of the same 'memories' in the back of her mind.
Tonks has never acted her age and would probable find it very easy to get along with Harry at this stage in his life. One of the problems with this would be Dumbledore... Is Tonks in the 'Order' yet, or haven't they organized since Voldemort doesn't have a body yet?
Carmen will also be an interesting paring for Harry. Just how will he react to a Muggle girl? Will Tom's view of Muggles effect Harry poorly?
I look forward to your next chapter.
Rick
Author's response
I have to say this is the best review i have recieved so far. Thank you. No the order hasn't formed yet and Tonks is still an auror trainee.