Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) Cateagle 2007-12-25

-laughs uproariously- So the Dursley's coddling of "Little Dumdums" led to their death? They earned it, then. Seriously, that scene did have resonances, for me, of a scene out of one of Heinlein's "Future History" short stories, set on a spaceship traveling 'tween Earth-orbiting and Luna-orbiting space stations. Not the same scene by a long shot, but with the same basic theme of an arrogant kid with an indulgent father really mucking things up.

I rather enjoyed this chapter, esp. some of the little "bits" you dropped like the levitating while meditating and how it annoyed someone as I do recognize the individual involved. I'm glad to see that living with Tony Stark has given Harry a much better appreciation of dealing with people and how to properly run damage control as well as how to defuse situations. I can't see Draco just rolling over, but if he is "given furiously to think, it just might have a rather positive effect in the longer term, which seems to be what Harry is aiming at.

I suspect the troll is now toast, but I also suspect that the side effects/backblast of releasing that much chaos magic on Harry is not going to be pretty, esp. when his backup approach was essentially a full-out kamikaze move. There will most definitely be some fascinating repurcussions from this. -chuckle- Anyone care to wager that Tony uses this to try and again argue his case for armor?

Oh, and the Pirate Birthday Celebration was a very nice touch; I can well believe the Wesealey twins joining in.

Author's response

- BIngo, you found my inspiration for the scene...

- I can just see him doing it to Strange, and Wang putting him up to it. Clea would probably be tickled by it too.

- This technique is NOT going to work on Draco, but Harry will not be Draco's enemy, rather someone he argues with, mostly for the fun of it, both knowing that they will never change the mind of the other. This is not to say that Harry's words don't change any Slytherin minds...

- You're no fun, you keep seeing my plot twists before I finish them.

- Tony's going to want to Armor Harry up, but he's going to continue to resist the idea.

- I was having fun with it right up to the point I disturbed myself with the image of Dumbles in a lavender eyepatch...