Review for While Love's On The Line

While Love's On The Line

(#) ThisSUICIDE 2007-12-26

I really like this story, update soon please. Good work. I really liek the story line, and I love how Gerard was so straight forward in the third chapter, calling Frankie's girlfriend a bitch. Lol. And, Frankie making cookies, eally cute he made them in the shape of hearts. But she thre them away =(

Author's response

Yes, I know, I hate writing mean things about Frankie from Wilona's point of view. None of what she thinks is true!