I stumbled across your work as the result of a recommendation, and have been enjoying it so far. One quibble, though; on this story the intro says 'Fleur, Harry, Hermione' with no mention of Susan. If this is going to be a Harry/Susan fic you need to put that in the intro; some of us nutcases only read ship-specific stories, no matter how well written they are.....
Author's response
Unfortunately, Susan isn't a viable choice in the ship character selection table.