This was pretty cute. If you like doing shorter fics, there's this comm on Livejournal - community.livejouranl.com/Avatar_Contest - that I recently joined (hence my only two Avatar fics x.x;), so you should check that out, too. Also, yeah, isn't it great when you get reviews from illiterate tards who aren't coherent enough to string two clauses together? XD Way to bite back, though.