You're not seriously going to leave this there, are you? I mean, seriously! You have to continue this. It has a great plot, and you write Methos very well. The progression of you story is believable, and I really want to see how Methos handle's Jack Harkness (gotta love that guy) holding him and asking the hard questions. Will he be taken back to the hub for questioning? Will Methos try to escape? When? How? Does he succeed?
You're killing me. This is a great story and I hope you continue it.
Thank you for your enthousiasm!
To be honest, I have no immediate plans to continue this. However, if inspiration strikes, who knows...