wow....hahha.....
ur soo weird!!!
hinata and naruto will end up together
thats wut makes it dumb
change things a lil bit
make it fun
like hinata and naruto is to normal
leave ur story the way it is butt
make a new one with more humour
not all romance and sex-warnings
make it interesting....
no offence its a nice story but its to mushhyy make it funny at least
like a messed up relationship that in the end it gets better
or a nce relation ship that sukks
or a relationship with naruto n sasuke thats thier gay!
MAKE IT FUNNY
OR SCARY
or a LITTLE ROMMANTIC AND A LITTLE FUNNY
all i hav to say is......................
FIX IT