awww. that was sad. I like it. I like how you took time to describe the small things like pete's coffee.
I could help you edit. if you want. I think I'm fairly good with grammar.
Author's response
OMG thank you so much for the review...i really like them...and here is my e mail.
cherrylips223320005@yahoo.com
or
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and keep reading!!!!
it will only get better....BTW i have 8 other chapters for this story so yeah i am ready to post when ever...