A very intersting and unique story.
Well written, and I defiantly like your character interaction. Tenten and Yugao were great, and I also like how your Temari acted, as I could defiantly see her doing that.
Your idea with Benihime is unqiue, and I look foreword to seeing more.
I do have a couple questions though, if you dont mind:
1) Is there a pairing in the story? If there is, is there a chance that you could do one that DOESNT involve Hinata or Sakura......I just don't think it would go well witht he story.
2) This questions is more of a curious one....why did you choose to write this on FICWAD? I do like ficwad, but feel limited by it, as it isnt that popular so there aren't as many stories, and also few readers. I was just curious why you chose to use it instead of something like Fanfiction.net. I am sure your story would be very popular there, and you would defiantly get more reviews and insights then you do here on ficwad. Just curious.
Well, thank you for the wonderful story, I hope to see more. It is defiantly an enjoyable read that I will keep track of.
Till next time