Review for Whole
I really, really liked this. It was so Zack to me. So arrogant and delightful in his arrogance. Good job!
And actually, they did have cell phones, even in the original game. They're called PHS or GMS devices and they work like cells and walkie-talkies. That's how you changed your party members out in the game; Cloud called them on the phone and they switched groups.
Author's response
Thank you so much! I do realize the PHS is a phone but the earlier reviewer was being heavy-handed with the 'I don't remember that from the game' in the entire section here at the time. I tried to be diplomatic instead of going for an argument, knowing that Compilation would set her straight eventually.