(#) Vanir 2007-12-31
For a piece of, as you said, drunken profoundness, it was bloody good. I have a thing for stream-of-progression poetry, and this piece is now copied onto my backup drive. The weariness (yes, i got it too) was excellently portrayed, and the utter devastation of their worlds and persons were ...chilling.
Gods, i wish i was that poetic in my ramblings.
kowtow
Vanir
Author's response
Thanks so much for the lovely review!