(#) Worry 2008-01-01
Very nice story. I've fallen out of touch with the Marvel Universe, so i don't recognize half of the characters, but I like the story. You have very good pacing. As others have noted, Harry is sounding a bit to "adult" but that's entirely forgivable considering how he was raised. I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's response
- For the most part the people I've used are part of the Ironman mythos, The Avengers, and Beast from the xmen and Doctor Strange for good measure.