LOL I should not be allowed to read your stuff after a couple of drinks! Loved the ending. :P The one problem is when anyone writes about Skid Row and I've been to the pub I always think they're writing about me (being called Rachel and all!)! "Oh look, someone's writing about me... oh, no they're not..." Anyway, I'm really starting to get into this and I'd love to see what Bas's reaction is Rachel's confession. :)
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hey thanks.the funny part is that i was writing this after a few drinks and when i looked over it the next day i thought 'wow, i should write everything a little buzzed. it seems to help' anyway i love it that one of my favorite authors is reviewing my story. i'm so tickled. i'll try to get the next chapter up, if my horses will let me. they like to colic in the winter.