Review for Bella Rising

Bella Rising

(#) Vanir 2008-01-03

I'm sorry i didn't review the previous chapters, but i just had to continue the story. The Mama Pansy idea was just brilliant. What would they really do? I hope this.

The idea that Dark Lords are born out of stupidity isn't new, but you did paint a great picture of it.

The collaboration between the afflicted pair is just so great, and i love the respect they show each other. Putting them in the House of Hope is a great move, and the fact that Remus asked her about her feeding habits regarding the children was perfectly in character. I wonder what Harry will say to it the next time he pops by. I also look forward to the Sons attack on the House, with three shapeshifters on the premises. Odin gives the term 'ankle-biter' a whole new meaning.

Brilliant. I just spent my entire rating allotment on this story.

Vanir

Author's response

Wow, thank you for that glowing review! I love your description of little Odin as an ankle biter. If I had to go back and re-title this fic I think I'd call it "The Accidental Families."
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