Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) Vanir 2008-01-04

Thank you!

Not only did you give me a great chapter, and procured one hell of a backbone for Harry (who's been a bit lame occasionally,) you also solved one of the problems with my story. Thanks again.

Harry's standing in the Brotherhood is interesting, and the fairly complex piece of associative parselmagic was brilliant.

It followed the path of Genius, something that seems to make sense in the moment, it's tried, and then years are spent trying to work out why.
I love it.

Well, I'm too late to rate, but here's a solid fiver.


Author's response

You're welcome, even if I'm not totally sure what for. I look forward to seeing what you do with the idea. I (and others) have often used Parsel-magic here and there, but I thought it was time to make a bit more use of it. I hope to work more into the story