AS stated in the review by cateagle "This is quite the fascinating start and I'm going to be looking forward to seeing the backstory." I rarely tend to read cross-over's as they tend to lean to one particular stroy or the other with just the charcter's from the other showing through. However with your first chapter I see a rather well blended story that encompasses two diffrent stories. Now I know that every aurthor get's this from a reader at one point in time but I would like to offer any outsider view's that you may deem helpfull and will leave my email address here for you.. Again a well written first chapter of what I hope is a story that will come to completion.
Author's response
What attracted me to a Harry/Jason crossover was that they were both fully realized characters. That makes it easier to keep a balance between them by switching points of view.