Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) sparky40sw 2008-01-07

Great chapter - i do so like it when righteous anger gives a smiting that won't be forgotten. Please excuse the archaic terms - but the scenes here and in the previous chapter (Lucky's demise) were priceless.

While Ginny is not my favorite character, it is kind of sad to see her so literally demented.

I also agree with Dr T above - Dumbledork and Snape both should be severely punished as accessories before and after the fact for each and every rape. And the best punishment that I have heard of is a healing charm and impalement - on a short, say 4 foot tall, stake, so the criminal lasts at least 10 times the accumulated time of all the rapes combined.

thanks for continuing the story.

Author's response

- Thanks. A little smiting is good for the soul...

- More on Ginny soon...

- The Doc has a vicious streak about a yard wide, something a lot of my reviewers share... Me too...