umm... yeah. i originally was going to say there were no words but apparently you but it in your comments. There's almost no description, it's too short, their out of character, and the wording's crude. but... umm... if you expanded on the plot line of cloud doubting leon's love for him and put in situations outside of the sex scene, it'd probably end up being longer and easier to write on. oh, and this should be nc-17 with a sexual content rating for future notice...