Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Teresa 2008-01-08

I loved the way this chapter started off.....Fred and George's attitude towards Malfoy's death was spot on! I could see the two of them saying just that as they worked on the latest Wheezes and considered how to help Harry. I also liked Tracey's talk with Hermione.....they might never be close friends but have a good working association. Draco and the other rapists are about to meet a most unholy alliance (evil grin). I look forward to seeing what the co wives come up with! And Neville rocks! I'm not suprized that last DE sang like the Mormon Tabernacle Choir. I had the feeling that Kingsley is considering a future team for his department: Potter and Longbottom. Poor Voldy (not)....between Harry and Neville he's losing all of his best minions. Looks hopeful....is Snape next? Will Harry and Neville fix him next Potions class? Has Ginny totally lost it? Is it a mixture of Voldy's possession, Dumbles's actions and her own choices? Is Ron going through something similar? It seems that Hannah will fit right in with the Longbottom family, I liked seeing how Hannah made it clear to her future in laws that she and Neville are together. Here's another alliance that Dumbles will have a hard time dealing with! Hmmmmm...this chapter showed Voldy's reactions, and I can't wait to see Dumbles! Many thanks for this installment!

Author's response

- The twins aren't the type to cry over spilled milk.

- I figured the best method of redirecting Hermione's anger from herself would be to give her a target...

- Neville's a good guy, who has been crapped on by pretty much everyone. Now the shoe's on the other foot.

- Snape is going down, but all Harry and Neville are going to be doing is sitting in the audience with a jumbo box of popcorn...

- Yeah, Ginny's lights are on, but no one is home. Ron too. Dumbles or their own actions? Yes.