Has this really gotten no reviews? I personally found this very moving, you definately have a way with words; it exposes the slower ageing in Saiyans for the curse it really is. It might be fun to have unlimited power and strength for endless decades, but when everyone you ever knew and loved starts dropping dead around you, it's not so 'cool' anymore. A very well-writeen piece. I highly encourage you to continue with your writing endeavours, you are a very skilled individual. Favourited.