Again,,A rather well writtin chapter. Your idea about Bourne's magic ability and his use of such magic has a rather refreshing take on an old idea,,at least to me. I look foreward to seeing you also flush out this new snape like character. As mayfair void asked "Will we see Harry teaching Bourne about magic in return for Bourne teaching him how to hone himself physically?" I will be looking foreward to seeing this idea take shape or not. The other thing I think will add to your story is the incluesion of Nicky Parson. Again a well writtin chapter,, I look foreward to reading your next chapter.
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Than you for the review. I'm not quite sure how or if Nicky fits into the story but I was wondering why she was willing to throw away her career and life for Jason, knowing that she might never see him again.