Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) Elfwyn 2008-01-12

Fantastic plot. Love the Brotherhood OCs, Snape and Dumbledore being de-fanged and Malfoy being blinded. Sirius is an ass that needs manners pounded into him. There is the occasional mistyped word, usually two put together, but other than that it is a riveting story showcasing the foibles and bigotry of the wizarding world and the mistakes even the immortals can make. Can't wait to see what happens in the Chamber and beyond. Will Harry choose to be an immortal leaving the wizarding world behind?

Author's response

I'm not sure how the run-togther words happen, as some occur when I translate the chapter to html, and then even more creep in when I up-load to ficwad.