Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) Pointer 2008-01-13

Great chapter. Not a lot of action, but quite a bit of background.

I especially like the interaction with the other heroes and their kids.

Stark talking with the Patils and the Grangers would make sense. While the kids in canon are routinely abused and neglected, it doesn't work that way in the "normal" world.

Being able to slip in some more modern communications will help enhance the story.