Review for Alone
Ok this is good, and its funny so dont take this the wrong way. The way that you have this one and Obsessions (sp?) in D+J and how they are the erxact same but with diffrent names kinda sucks. The first time youy read one but whemn you read the pther and it is the same the second one sucks. They are two completly diffrent shows and deserve completly diffrent fan fictions. Ok the second one was good for D+J but OOC for CotT, but the third was good for CotT and OOC for D+J, but the first one did work for both. So next time just pick one show (the one that it is the best fitted for) and post it in that shows fan fiction area. Please. But still they are well written and very funny. Just think about which show each of them is better suited for. Also a way to make the second one in CotT to work is make it a J/T fiction, Atlanta would not like flowers and Archie would not be caught dead buying them.
Author's response
Yeah, I guess you're right. In a way, I thuoght they fit both, that's why I did that. What happened to you? Do you not go on the D and J boards anymore? This is the first time I heard from you for a long time! I hope everything is good. Thanks for your honest advice, it was helpful. Thanks for reviewing!
xxDarkness' Kidxx