(#) brad 2008-01-14
Some nice details on the memory/horcrux combination, like the additional memories added, and it's view/opinion of Harry and the druids.
Love the idea of Draco's and Pansy's wishes being fulfilled by Harry's magic; cute notion! And it's a nice note that Harry doesn't take advantage of Draco's subsequent tunnel vision.
Not sure I like the loophole in Pansy's condition - in that it's only mirrors that are attached to the castle which are influenced by the spell - when Draco's plight has no such condition.
I've never liked Rowling's setting up elves to be, in fact, more powerful than wizards, or those fanfics that have featured elves heavily. I'd be happy if 'popping' and such was just forgotten, when it came to wizard-on-wizard action. Oh well.
So, this did become a H/Hr story, hey? I think earlier on you were undecided?
:-)