Gosh, I can't believe I just found this. This story is just.... Incredible. Amazing. Wonderful. I don't even have the right words to describe such greatness. I promise I'll rate and review tomorrow. I have to go right now, but I just wanted to tell you that this first chapter was completely and utterly amazing. I wish I could have the writing skills you do. I mean, even the character is intriguing. Each word pulls me in more and more. I cannot wait to read some more. But, I have to go right now.
Amazing, dear.
Just amazing.