Interesting, however I don't really see Rocky Horror here. Sorry. I like the twist with the Horcrux, however you now have a new Dark Lordette, and this doesn't really apply to Harry. Since you don't have Harry much in the story, I'm curious on how much further you plan to take the story and whether there would be a character focus shift to accomodate the story dynamic.
Geovanni Luciano
Author's response
Don't think Rocky Horror plotline, think Dr. Frank-N-Furter's sinister romp.
As to where the story is going, there is an outline (with one or two diverging sub-plots).
Unlike "Family Issue," this story is not writing itself.
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