Wow what a fic!
The changes you wrought and the way things are going sure make this a very exiting read. I had liked the friendship that harry and Hermione developed, then to see the inclusion of Luna so early and there Harry caring for her made my day.
I've always believed that if not Hermione, Luna would have been the next best girl to love our hero!
Now it seems claer Hery does care for both greatly but its more Brotherly towards Luna here. And I'm ok with it as long as its Hermione who's hes with.
Too bad he can't Marry both eventually! They match up well as a trio!
On the way you added the Ancients and the Druids and gave the Vamps a lighter use. Great job, just remember even there Vampires are dark as well. So a few should be on Voldy-Shorts side too.
Hope you update soon!
dennisud