Review for Awake in a Dream

Awake in a Dream

(#) Pheonee 2006-07-25

0mg 1yk 7h@t 15 s0 5w3e7!!1!!1!!11!1!11!oneonetwo

Sorry I just had to speak in leet. In case you don't speak it, what I just said was "That was so sweet". It was so fabulously great. I only noticed one tweeny, tiny flaw--so small an ant couldn't have seen it without glasses--and that was that you said "Bottom rosy lip". Which would have sounded so much better if it were "Rosy bottom lip". See what I mean by it being so small an ant couldn't have seen it without glasses?

And the "End of Fashback" bit was at the wrong spot, it seems. Although, as I cannot read your mind, I do not know if you meant it that way or if it was an accident.

Once again great story--vying with "Demons Within Me" as the best story on the site in my opinion--And if don't update in two days or not have fun at your camp...let's just say I will not be happy. AND my auntie's doberman is still around...And when I'm not happy...she isn't happy. And when she isn't happy...WATCH OUT.

Eagerly awaiting your next update,
Pheonee