Review for Pains of War

Pains of War

(#) Olliegami 2008-01-20

Hey there - It's a shame that this stops here - although I noticed that the last time you updated with in August of 2006, It would be nice to think maybe your FMA muse will spark up again?

A wonderful five chapters - I did notice a few spelling mistakes here and there - but other than that I think you've managed this well - everyone's reactions seem pretty IC to me.