(#) Vanir 2008-01-20
Oh my.
Last things first, the final musings of Draco was a thing of beauty. Paraguay? isn't that a rodent?
The stone cold efficiency of Harry's mentors is great, and chilling, to behold, but i agree that this chapter felt a tad bland, although i see the necessity. The pre and post of the chamber is more interesting that the event itself, from this story's point of view.
All in all, good work. I have a feeling that Ginny won't get away all squeaky clean from this.
Vanir