They were rather gentler with Lucky than I would have been - IMHO passing that diary on to a child is a particularly vile and vicious form of attempted murder - and should be punished as such - But it is your story and I am looking forward to see what you have in store - maybe he will now be a sort of Judas Goat to lead them to moldie when he shows.
thanks for sharing your talent and skill - It is much appreciated.
I also quite like the way you handled the chamber itself - the coordinated attack smooth and cool.