This was a decent chapter, however, it was a bit short. I would have been more descriptive with the last scene with Harry and Hermione, and would probably have even added a flash of blue to seal the magical oath from Harry. The bits with Blaise need to be more descriptive. With Transgendered characters you've really got to go for the shot value of them in great detail because it's has a real magnetic appeal, especial amongst homophobes. I've received alot of reviews in regards to my treatment of my Ron character in Season of Hell in his transformation there where people were literally asking me to use magic in them as apposed to being so graphic in describing the situation. Now all you need is an incredible shrinking member for Blaise whom is desperate to counteract the effects, finds a solution which has setbacks in twice the reduction once the potion wears off. SMILES. Update soon.
Geovanni Luciano.
Author's response
Okay, this is just scary. I have written a scene where Blaise can't "perform."
So you have a severely conflicted quasitranssexual who is frustrated to boot.
I based the scene on someone who has an increased dependency on Viagra, the more he takes the more he needs to take to get the same result.
I guess great minds think alike. . .
I like the idea of the "Incredible Shrinking Member," I may use that if I have your permission.
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