Review for Baik
This fic is beautiful. I must admit, I write things from the "Yaoi-Hebi" side of him that is so prevalent, but I have had an Idea like this before. I just never had the talent to write like this.
DeATh_iS_mACAbrE_IS_oRochImaRU ,and the world just keeps spinning to the same beat of that cobra heart. Being of French and indonesian decent, the word Baik drew me in like a moth to a flame. I could not tear my eyes from this story, however macabre and spooky it was is has been will be . It's inspiring in the way all good fiction not just fan-fiction should be. To write a review... to have found a fic like this was purely astounding, astonishing in that it hasn't been done this way before won't be done again with such style
This fic was death-pretty the way a swaying cobra is so death-pretty and macabre in a way that just suits so perfectly the HEbiKamI that Orochimaru our lord and saviour is. This fic was pure poetry written in a style that is so beyondbelief/beyondperception/beyondlife it is so death-pretty that I needed to respond to it immediately. A fiction.. a character depth... so fitting/revealing/perfect that is to amazing to behold...
I could not write a review that matched it's awesome power, but am fortunate to even try.
In Indonesia, I know that drinking the blood of snakes is believed to increase sexual virility.
And In egypt ?Moses'? staff became a snake, showing his divine power.
Snakes.
The tempter, and the power.
The place/person/gODgODgOD where we all draw strength from in our darkest hour
SatAN- gODgOdgOD so death-pretty The most beautiful of all his servants unjustly ( for who could intend harm to Orochimaru that he would deserve, our lord and saviour ) Cast out from- heaven from- grace from- his favour when Kami should have worried about falling from oRochImaRU ( our lord and saviour, our beacon of light ) for he has made himself another heaven in hell/Hell/HELL/ for all his children we who are blessed to be in his favour blessed/blessed/blessed with his etherial beauty oRochImaRU death-pretty so- he is nothing near a clown, but he is just as tricky as one. He is there for no one's amusement, but they whisper that Death is macabre .
He iS
The good, the bad, and the oh so death-pretty beautiful in that way that only he can be Our lord and saviour oRochImaRU.
Author's response
O.O Wow. Thank you so much - your review is gorgeous. I adore you. IWCT told me that my style in Baik is a sort of horror/Jabberwocky, and I think you emulated it perfectly in your review. It kind of awes me that you were so inspired as to do that. Baik was written stream-of-conscious and hasn't gotten much feedback, so I really haven't thought much of it (besides growling at readers for evidentally disliking one of my personal favorites). But WOW. You and IWCT have completely convinced me. I absolutely understand what it takes to get carried away by a fic, and as I said before, it AWES me that I managed to do that to someone. Thank you, and all hail the God of Snakes. ^-^