this is realllly good!
you expressed your feeling into the story so easily.
which made the story easy to follow.
i like it alot!
great job!
xx
Marissa.
Author's response
thanks marissa :) !
& no, its not a true story..
it just kindof came to me,
i dont even know whyy. :P
but, im glad that someone likes it :) .
at least i know that im going somewhere with my stories :) !