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try to add... hmmm I dont know maybe a decent ending? dont get me wrong the story was great and all that but you dont even know what happens to her! all you did was cut it short! a good idea would be to finish the story then do the whole sappy ending thing
Author's response
The concept was Vincent supporting Yuffie when she was worried, and I purposely left it as an open ending; but an ending has been added.