(#) Xadro 2008-02-06
I can honestly say I really like your story especially the way you explain everything in detail and you really capture Ollivander perfectly (imho)
Also I like the fact that you explain a little about the rituals and potions he takes, and the fact that he doesn’t instantly turns in a Super!Harry.
10/10
I really hope you update soon again, and don’t worry about long chapters, I don’t mind ;P
- Xadro