Review for Like Some Song You Can't Unlearn

Like Some Song You Can't Unlearn

(#) Terdwilicker 2008-02-06

This story is well written, intelligent, considerably better than HBP and DH. You could probably rework it with more environmental details (there are five senses, not two) if you were up to polishing this further. As it is, its one of the better HP fanfics I've read for sheer intelligence. I like how direct your Harry is, as if the story were written by Heinlein and Harry were possessed by Lazarus Long. True, you're tired of that aspect, and its time for more action, and more development of his romance with Narcissa, and resolution of Draco and Severus (and Ginny and the Basilisk), but what you've written still works for the story and will eventually offer some opportunity for resolution with the Potters. I really hope you continue this.