I was nailed to a chair while waiting for torture from therapists after getting a knee worked on. This story was pointed out to me by my son as good reading to take mind of things.
He was definitely right.
A FEW miner blips in word use, but well thought out and scripted.
What I DO find scary is that he has left a opening to start it over again.
Look forward to seeing where you go with this. The possibilities, from Hary, Harminey, and Blaise to the Professor's Black seem endless